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                                                     When will it be enough?

                   When will I have proved myself to be strong?

   When will I have done enough
to be recognised as better than you?

                                            Or simply different than you?                  

                                                             When will I have I have shown
                                                                   that I am not you?

             When will I be free of you?

                                                       How do I convince them that
                                                              I am more than what you did to me?

                    Maybe I need to prove it to myself first.


But how?
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~chancerox Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i feel like this so often. guess we have to recognize the good in ourselves sometimes. beautiful work. :)
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~Kizin-of-kaplumba Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, sometimes before others can recognise our good points we must see them ourselves first.
Thank you.
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i feel like this sometimes. great poem.
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~Kizin-of-kaplumba Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and thanks for the fave, it means a lot to me to know when someone likes my piece's. I'm sorry that you can relate to the subject though, I know how hard that can be.
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Well thank you for the great art and the encouragement.
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~Kizin-of-kaplumba Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You can always come to me for encouragement, I may only be able to write darkly but I try to help others whenever I can.
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:iconreizyouup:
That's so sweet of you. Thank you.
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