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She calls him
When the silence gets too much,
But the walls have closed in
And the stars bid her
Hush.
He says her name in question
And waits a little while,
Her breathing tells him everything
And he says
Alright.
He listens to her silence
Until she falls asleep
And waits a little longer
To be sure the demons
Are fighting fair
And understand that he's still listening
Even if he isn't there.
He chuckles at her quiet snores
And lets his eyes close,
Whispers a quiet promise,
And keeps his phone close.
When the silence gets too much,
But the walls have closed in
And the stars bid her
Hush.
He says her name in question
And waits a little while,
Her breathing tells him everything
And he says
Alright.
He listens to her silence
Until she falls asleep
And waits a little longer
To be sure the demons
Are fighting fair
And understand that he's still listening
Even if he isn't there.
He chuckles at her quiet snores
And lets his eyes close,
Whispers a quiet promise,
And keeps his phone close.
Time for a lighter piece I think, past few submissions have been a bit too personal really.
Yeah, not too sure how this became a piece from his perspective rather than hers but my work often writes itself.
~ Edit 22 Dec 2014
Yeah, not too sure how this became a piece from his perspective rather than hers but my work often writes itself.
~ Edit 22 Dec 2014
Changed the ending a little, think it's a bit cleaner now.
Let me know what you think
Let me know what you think
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Reminds me of Katy! Love it!