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It hurt you know,
Falling for you.

I felt very bump and bang,
Every bruise and break.
I tried to hold on,
I tried to slow down,
I tried to stop.
But it was inevitable.
Gravity was too much,
It kept pulling me down
To you.

And when I landed,
When I hit the ground
At your feet
I could barely breathe.
It was too much
For anyone to handle
Let alone me.

But I watched you reach down,
And felt you pick me up.
You gathered together
All my broken pieces
And worked for days
Making me whole again.

It took time
But I finally realised
That for me to fall down to you
Meant that you
Had fallen too.

So once I was rebuilt
I searched for your missing pieces.
I found your hand
That made strings
Into souls.
I found your lungs,
Which turned air
Into a caress.
And I found your eyes,
Their blue oceans
Drowning me.

But I couldn't find your heart.
Not straight away.
And I'm still looking,
But I can't see you anymore.

It's dark
But warm
Because I know
That I am getting closer to your heart.

But it makes me wonder.
How far did you fall?
How much did it hurt?
Because to get to you,
To find your hand,
To find your lungs,
To find your eyes,
To find your heart,
It almost destroyed me.

Did you know that?

Did you know,
I fell for you.
Hard.
And now,
               I'm lost.
I'm not quite sure where this was going, or where it even began.
Feedback is always welcome.
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LustfulDevil Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013   Writer
nice work
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Kizin-of-kaplumba Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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LustfulDevil Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013   Writer
welcome
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I love this, it's intricate and complicated, but I understand it. Nice work ^^ :clap:
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Kizin-of-kaplumba Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much, I'm glad you could understand it. Thank you for the fave as well by the way, it always means a lot
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Me too, and your very welcome. Art in an artist community deserves some recognition :clap: well done :D
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Kizin-of-kaplumba Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you again, :huggle:
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
You are super duper welcome :glomp:
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PastorTimothy Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
reminds me of my situation
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BabyCharChar Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist
I think it's great and very descriptive about the persons feelings and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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