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Most great poems tell a story,
Teach a lesson,
Add something to the world
That was always there
But needed to be remembered.

This isn’t a great poem.
This is just the realisation
That one day
You let go of my hand.

And never picked it up again.
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I can taste a forest fire
In the back of my throat.
No amount of Saline can wash it away

Ash is trailing into my lungs,
Lining my breaths,
And staining me grey.

Machines cry out an alarm,
They're saying my name,
But there are no firefighters left.

Bury me in the ash.

(Let new roots tangle in my ribs)
She toes the edges of sunlight,
Tanning her fingers
As they play with ever-changing shadows.
This dark dweller,
This star searcher,
She is not afraid of the light,
She is not daunted.

She is a shadow,
A layer of grey
On a black backdrop.
She was not made for light,
She was made by light,
An inevitable consequence,
A weight to keep the balance.

Is your heart lighter than a feather?
Does it shine?
Would you blind Anubis?
Would he admit you to the skies?
Would your light guide men home?
Because you are judged.

Show the world your light,
Embrace the shadows you create,
Be a religious experience
Without the gods to intervene.
Be a light that lasts
Long after the wick has burnt away.
Be glorious.
We Are Judged.
This one definitely seemed to have a life of it's own. 
Benn thinking about the Egyptians a lot at the moment, remembered how confused I was when I was first told about Anubis weighing a persons heart against a feather, because it seemed an impossible test. Started wondering whether I was looking at it wrong.

Anyway, let me know what you think.
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Happy Birthday DA!!

  1. How long have you been on DeviantArt?

    5 years now, which makes me feel really old.

  2. What does your username mean?

    Shhh . . . I was young and silly when I made it, the secret will stay with me forever.

  3. Describe yourself in three words.

    Hopeful. Trying. Disorganised.

  4. Are you left or right handed?

    Right.

  5. What was your first deviation?

    Wow, it's so long ago I can't really remember. It wasn't good though, probably lurking in the back of my gallery and scaring unsuspecting pigeons. 

  6. What is your favourite type of art to create?

    Literature, mainly poems at the moment but I love writing books as well. 

    And I make a bit of jewellery which is fun.

  7. If you could instantly master a different art style, what would it be?

    Painting, in it's many different styles.

  8. What was your first favourite?

    Of my own work? Not a clue any longer, though I can still remember how excited I was.

    Of someone else work? Well that would be Alexiuss and his piece Gabriel.

  9. What type of art do you tend to favourite the most?

    Everything under the sun, I love it all.

  10. Who is your all-time favourite deviant artist?

    Probably Alexiuss and Len-Yan.

  11. If you could meet anyone on DeviantArt in person, who would it be?

    Someone who likes my writing and maybe wants to write something together. There's really very few things as uplifting as talking to someone who really appreciates what you're creating and wants to talk about it.

  12. How has a fellow deviant impacted your life?

    Yes. He's been invaluable.

  13. What are your preferred tools to create art?

    Red ink pens and paper.

  14. What is the most inspirational place for you to create art?

    Anywhere really, so long as I feel safe.

  15. What is your favourite DeviantArt memory?

    I've got to admit, finding out I had a DA was incredible, and a bit silly. I hadn't even noticed that I'd been given the DA until someone congratulated me, I was just confused about why one of my poems was suddenly so popular. But when I realised? Wow. 

  • Listening to: Listener - I don't want to live forever
  • Eating: Jelly babies

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Bethany
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
United Kingdom
Current Residence: my own little world
Favourite style of art: landscapes or waterscapes
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015

Hey! :rose:


I wanted to drop by personally to say thanks for joining TheWritePlace! I’m excited that people seem enthusiastic about it :giggle: If you wanna know more about our group check out Our Rules (there aren’t many and they’re all mostly common sense to me!) or just ask! If you fancy getting more involved we do have positions open which you can find out about here. For now I hope you enjoy the group and find it helpful. If you have ideas on how to make it more useful, suggestions, feedback, anything, just let us know - and when our chatroom #TheWritePlace officially launches (soon) I hope to see you in there too :love:


- Kate :heart:


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DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the watch!!!!! :tighthug: :hug: :huggle: :heart:
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Kizin-of-kaplumba Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, your writing is amazing. 

And thanks for the llama! :glomp: remake 
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DalekCaanII Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
no problemo! APH Prussia tackle hug 
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Thousandfoldfeathers Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Student General Artist
I don't know who you are, but Have a Llama and have a nice day I am a dummy! 
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Kizin-of-kaplumba Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
well thank you very much :TipOfTheHat: 
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xXI-Feel-InfiniteXx Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for the fave :heart:
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Kizin-of-kaplumba Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you very very much, I'm honoured. I hope you keep making features, it's good way of introducing new art to people and it's always appreciated by the artists. And I hope I keep writing things that you enjoy, thank you again
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xxBatzyxx Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, dear :)
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